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lighter:
::Deeply, and profoundly missing Hop's ability, to boil words down with much brevity::

::sigh::

I have so little room to say so much in this legal brief....

which is due in the morning.

Lighter

Hopalong:
Alas, wish I could wave a wand and make it easier, Lighter.
Thanks for the kind words but my vaunted editing ability
can really evaporate at times.

I hope just taking a chainsaw to it and not sweating the
smaller points will help.

Tighten, tighten, tighten is my very best advice.
Stick to nouns and verbs that describe actions and
avoid innuendo and nuances.

love
Hops

lighter:

--- Quote from: Hopalong on May 11, 2014, 08:41:29 PM ---Alas, wish I could wave a wand and make it easier, Lighter.
Thanks for the kind words but my vaunted editing ability
can really evaporate at times.

I hope just taking a chainsaw to it and not sweating the
smaller points will help.

Tighten, tighten, tighten is my very best advice.
Stick to nouns and verbs that describe actions and
avoid innuendo and nuances.

love
Hops

--- End quote ---

::saluting, and going for chainsaw::

Lighter

Twoapenny:

--- Quote from: lighter on May 11, 2014, 09:03:58 PM ---
--- Quote from: Hopalong on May 11, 2014, 08:41:29 PM ---Alas, wish I could wave a wand and make it easier, Lighter.
Thanks for the kind words but my vaunted editing ability
can really evaporate at times.

I hope just taking a chainsaw to it and not sweating the
smaller points will help.

Tighten, tighten, tighten is my very best advice.
Stick to nouns and verbs that describe actions and
avoid innuendo and nuances.

love
Hops

--- End quote ---

::saluting, and going for chainsaw::

Lighter

--- End quote ---

Good luck, L.  With you all the way :) xx

lighter:
Well, I fell a tad bit short of perfection, but I'm mighty pleased with the brief, and feeling fine.

I will tell you this.....

opposing counsel isn't going to have much fun tackling his response brief.  Esp if he has other things to work on, and they always do.

The journey continues....

thanks for the kind thoughts.

Light

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