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Hollow-cost Survivor

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Window Pain
« on: March 12, 2005, 09:31:34 AM »
Window Pain

The window pain is full of fear
Tearful eyes distort glass so clear--
When I look inside is anyone there?

Threshold of pane could differentiate doubt,
You never feel rain when having a drought--
Does this expression come from in or out?

Those emerging feelings of life in our heart
Like a sill’s firm hold on glass shattered apart--
Grow wise and insightful to build a new start.

Look out through glass and reflect within
The true mirror rejects artificial skin--
To know where we’re going, we must know where we’ve been.
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mum

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Window Pain
« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2005, 10:36:03 AM »
Hollow, I certainly hope you write for a living....beautiful..thank you.
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Portia

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Window Pain
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2005, 10:52:49 AM »
"To know where we’re going, we must know where we’ve been."

aye, the unexamined life is not worth living is it...I guess it's more 'existing' than 'living'...

like the word-play, words play H, thank you.
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Hollow cost Survivor

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Window Pain
« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2005, 02:12:14 PM »
Thanks for your kind words and... understanding mine.
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Anonymous

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Window Pain
« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2005, 02:40:28 PM »
Hi survivor,

Poetry is usually lost on me, (at least the ones that don't start 'There was a young girl from Nantucket...' :wink: ) but even I appreciated your's.

I hope you will feel like staying around and sharing some of your story here, if you feel comfortable doing that. Or maybe you have already and I missed it.
Love the username by the way.

mudpup
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